However amazing your plot, however vital your characters, however seductive your setting, if your story/novel is poorly written it will be rejected.
So revise, revise and revise again. Is your beginning attention-grabbing? Does your plot meander? Are there long periods ofnothing much happening?
What about superfluous adjectives, adverbs? Over-long descriptions? Telling, not showing?
What about the time scale? Have you allowed sufficient days, months or years for the action to take place?
I could go on forever, but why not make your own checklist? Here's a page from one of my own novels after a first time rewrite -, but not the last.
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