BOOKER PRIZE JUDGES

SLAM-BANG BEGINNINGS!

An incredible avalanche of books are submitted for the annual Man Booker Prize. How do the judges manage to read them all?

One judge is said to read only the first eight lines of each novel and if they don't grab her she moves on to the next.

Anyway, that made me reconsider the opening sentences of my work in progress, which is about a boy who runs away to the circus so that he can learn to fly. I  moved a few sentences around, cut out others, and ended up with this:

Just before midnight on the 8th December 1941 a bomb fell on Number 23 Deremont Street.

It killed Jamie Bird's Mum and Dad instantly, and it buried Jamie beneath tons of rubble.

Five minutes earlier when the air raid siren began its warning wail his Mum had rushed to the kitchen to cut sandwiches and fill a flask with hot cocoa, and his Dad had rushed upstairs to collect thick jumpers and scarves to keep them warm in the street shelter.

They had told Jamie to wait inside the family's Morrison shelter in the dining room, which was supposed to be safe. But it didn't feel safe. The thunder of bricks, the screech of metal, the groaning of timbers, the hiss of water escaping from fractured pipes terrified him.

'Mum! Dad!' he cried.

Where were they?


Ten minutes' work but I think it 'grabs' more fiercely. 

CIRCUS LIFE

THE BOY WHO COULD FLY

This is the children's book that's been on my back burner for months. It's about two boys, one real life and one fictional, and the flying trapeze. The real life boy was my great uncle, a circus star billed as 'Una The Human Fly' who tragically was killed at the age of 16 while performing in 1891. The other boy is a (fictional) descendant half a century later (1941) who longs to join the circus and become a trapeze artist.

Having only visited a circus once in my life (far back in time when I was 14) I think I must be insane to tackle something that requires not only research into circus life but also research into the restrictions and problems of life in Britain during WW2. But there you go.

Meantime, though, can I ask your help regarding the book's title and cover? Originally I called it THE BOY ON THE FLYING TRAPEZE. I've changed that to THE BOY WHO COULD FLY, and I've just designed a cover with that title.

I'd really appreciate your comments on both title and design. Thank you in advance.